Today is a very difficult day of the year for Makrand, it’s been tough every year for him to survive these 24 hours but today was more troublesome. It was tenth death anniversary of his love, his wife Tarini. These were the exact number of years they spent together, madly in love. Five years of courtship and five years in marriage. After that fateful day, a decade ago he stopped living, he stopped being happy. All he was doing is dragging life, he stopped playing guitar as he played it for her, he stopped going into kitchen and trying his hands at cooking because he loved cooking for her. He distant himself from all the friends and relatives as everything reminded him of Tarini. That really didn’t help him keeping her memories away, rather the loneliness was breaking him further and creating a hollow in his life. She was his soul; the body is nothing without a soul.
Makarand and Tarini met during their graduation years, both were top students of their class. Both were good in studies as well as co-curricular. Cutthroat competition to be on the top. It was their college fest where the ice broke between them and they became soul mates, inseparable. There love became even stronger when they had a long-distance relationship when Tarini went to USA for her post-graduation, she got a scholarship and Makrand got a campus placement in his dream company. There families were more than happy to have each other, they were so compatible. After a courtship of five years they decided to get married, as there was no reason why they should not do it.
Both were doing great in their respective careers. Promotions, appraisals were doing justice to the hardwork and dedication they were putting. They loved their work. They learnt the art of work-life balance, managed their work and vacations beyond belief. They got a new house, decorated it as beautifully as possible. Had all the luxury and prosperity that is needed to lead a comfortable life. Like every couple they also had their share of ego tussle, misunderstanding and fights but their love always triumph. They couldn’t stop talking to each other for long. It was the time of global recession when Makrand lost his job, in that time Tarini did not only take the financial responsibility but more important was the mental and emotional pillar that she became for Makarand. She made sure that he doesn’t go into a self-pity or depression. It was a long period of 9 months before he got back into a role and company he desired.
That battle with the situation brought them even closer, they were just so dependent on each other that nothing else mattered. Time was flying fast, five years since they have been married. Families were pursuing them to start a family, even the age and biological clocks were ticking, but that one thing that they both were not mentally prepared for. One reason was will they be able to take up parenting responsibility, give undivided time and attentions to the baby or will they have to compromise on their career which was soaring high at that point. They were contemplating. But fate had a different plan altogether. And everything happened way to fast than anyone could have thought.
One day when Tarini came back home from her business tour with high fever, when they consulted the doctor Dengue was detected. God knows what went wrong or was it the hospitals carelessness or mistake that during the platelet transfusion she got blood infection. Makarand immediately shifted her to another hospital, she was directly taken to the ICU and then she never came out alive. It was multiple organ failure. Everything crumbled down for Makarand, he couldn’t even gather courage to get back home alone. As it was just a house now, house which was full of Tarini’s memories. Since then he was a robot, living life for the sake of it. Wishing everyday to go and meet Tarini in heaven as soon as possible, its been a decade today and the wait is still on……
“This post is a part of ‘DECADE Blog Hop’ #DecadeHop organized by #RRxMM Rashi Roy and Manas Mukul. The Event is sponsored by Glo and co-sponsored by Beyond The Box, Wedding Clap, The Colaba Store and Sanity Daily in association with authors Piyusha Vir and Richa S Mukherjee”
This was a heart-breaking read. I do hope Makarand finds hope and love again
Heart breaking story and you got us glued to it very nicely. Well done Ujjwal. Expecting more from you now
Makarand should come out of it now . It’s been a long time . Life’s meaning is to go on .
This was a heart-breaking read. I do hope Makarand finds hope and love again
Yes, love can come in life at anytime
This was a heart-breaking read. I do hope Makarand finds hope and love again
Yes, love can come in life at anytime
Heart breaking story and you got us glued to it very nicely. Well done Ujjwal. Expecting more from you now
Makarand should come out of it now . It’s been a long time . Life’s meaning is to go on .
This was a heart-breaking read. I do hope Makarand finds hope and love again
Yes, love can come in life at anytime
Heart breaking story and you got us glued to it very nicely. Well done Ujjwal. Expecting more from you now
This was a heart-breaking read. I do hope Makarand finds hope and love again
Heart breaking story and you got us glued to it very nicely. Well done Ujjwal. Expecting more from you now
This was a heart-breaking read. I do hope Makarand finds hope and love again
Yes, love can come in life at anytime
Heart breaking story and you got us glued to it very nicely. Well done Ujjwal. Expecting more from you now
Makarand should come out of it now . It’s been a long time . Life’s meaning is to go on .
A poignant tale —I especially liked the ending.
It’s an honor to get feedback on my fiction writing from you. 🙏🤩
A depressing story! How i wish you had ended it with a redeeming feature! Time heals! But does it?
-Rohit Verma
Next story, will be a happy one 🙂
A poignant tale —I especially liked the ending.
A depressing story! How i wish you had ended it with a redeeming feature! Time heals! But does it?
-Rohit Verma
Next story, will be a happy one 🙂
Oh this is such a sweet and heartbreaking story. I wish Makrand every joy and hope he finds love again!
Great take on the prompt! Well done <3
Thanks a lot, getting encouragement from you is a big deal for me.
Oh this is such a sweet and heartbreaking story. I wish Makrand every joy and hope he finds love again!
Great take on the prompt! Well done <3
Oh this is such a sweet and heartbreaking story. I wish Makrand every joy and hope he finds love again!
Great take on the prompt! Well done <3
Oh this is such a sweet and heartbreaking story. I wish Makrand every joy and hope he finds love again!
Great take on the prompt! Well done <3
Thanks a lot, getting encouragement from you is a big deal for me.
A joyous life cut short too soon! When loved ones leave this world, people tend to become robots. Not all wounds can be healed by time!
A joyous life cut short too soon! When loved ones leave this world, people tend to become robots. Not all wounds can be healed by time!
A joyous life cut short too soon! When loved ones leave this world, people tend to become robots. Not all wounds can be healed by time!
oh! I felt very sad… no one should face such torture…. life must go on.. nicely written fiction.
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oh! I felt very sad… no one should face such torture…. life must go on.. nicely written fiction.
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oh! I felt very sad… no one should face such torture…. life must go on.. nicely written fiction.
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oh! I felt very sad… no one should face such torture…. life must go on.. nicely written fiction.
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oh! I felt very sad… no one should face such torture…. life must go on.. nicely written fiction.
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oh! I felt very sad… no one should face such torture…. life must go on.. nicely written fiction.
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Such a sad story. Expected something better. The writing is good though.
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Such a sad story. Expected something better. The writing is good though.
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Such a sad story. Expected something better. The writing is good though.
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Such a sad story. Expected something better. The writing is good though.
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Such a sad story. Expected something better. The writing is good though.
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Its really sad ending and for anyone seeing their dear ones in trouble is most difficult moment and when they leave the world..life becomes so hard and painful..Ujjwal love the way you had narrated the whole story, it was totally heartfelt and awesome attempt on theme.
Its really sad ending and for anyone seeing their dear ones in trouble is most difficult moment and when they leave the world..life becomes so hard and painful..Ujjwal love the way you had narrated the whole story, it was totally heartfelt and awesome attempt on theme.
Thanks Doc 🙂
Its really sad ending and for anyone seeing their dear ones in trouble is most difficult moment and when they leave the world..life becomes so hard and painful..Ujjwal love the way you had narrated the whole story, it was totally heartfelt and awesome attempt on theme.
Its really sad ending and for anyone seeing their dear ones in trouble is most difficult moment and when they leave the world..life becomes so hard and painful..Ujjwal love the way you had narrated the whole story, it was totally heartfelt and awesome attempt on theme.
Its really sad ending and for anyone seeing their dear ones in trouble is most difficult moment and when they leave the world..life becomes so hard and painful..Ujjwal love the way you had narrated the whole story, it was totally heartfelt and awesome attempt on theme.
Thanks Doc 🙂
Its really sad ending and for anyone seeing their dear ones in trouble is most difficult moment and when they leave the world..life becomes so hard and painful..Ujjwal love the way you had narrated the whole story, it was totally heartfelt and awesome attempt on theme.
A really sad story.. well written
A really sad story.. well written
A really sad story.. well written
A really sad story.. well written
A really sad story.. well written
A really sad story.. well written
I like fiction being woven across the theme of the decade and your title had me hooked. Good attempt.
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I like fiction being woven across the theme of the decade and your title had me hooked. Good attempt.
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I like fiction being woven across the theme of the decade and your title had me hooked. Good attempt.
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It’s a beautiful story. Thankfully, the title prepared me for a sad one. I liked how you ended it and hope he finds love again.
Very humbled get this feedback from you
It’s a beautiful story. Thankfully, the title prepared me for a sad one. I liked how you ended it and hope he finds love again.
Very humbled get this feedback from you
It’s a beautiful story. Thankfully, the title prepared me for a sad one. I liked how you ended it and hope he finds love again.
Very humbled get this feedback from you
It’s a beautiful story. Thankfully, the title prepared me for a sad one. I liked how you ended it and hope he finds love again.
Very humbled get this feedback from you
Well expressed and written, I just hope it’s a fiction for your thoughts too as I have personally experienced a similar story in real life and the sad part is they had kids who are now looking for their mom.
You have narrated it very nicely. I can understand how tough it would be to pass each day without your loved one beside you.
Thoda fiction thoda inspiration.. it is even though to imagine the situation. Thanks Pargun.
Well expressed and written, I just hope it’s a fiction for your thoughts too as I have personally experienced a similar story in real life and the sad part is they had kids who are now looking for their mom.
You have narrated it very nicely. I can understand how tough it would be to pass each day without your loved one beside you.
Well expressed and written, I just hope it’s a fiction for your thoughts too as I have personally experienced a similar story in real life and the sad part is they had kids who are now looking for their mom.
You have narrated it very nicely. I can understand how tough it would be to pass each day without your loved one beside you.
Love is such a beautiful feeling!! Being seperated through death is worst time for the surviving partner. Such emotional fiction.
Love is such a beautiful feeling!! Being seperated through death is worst time for the surviving partner. Such emotional fiction.
Love is such a beautiful feeling!! Being seperated through death is worst time for the surviving partner. Such emotional fiction.
Love is such a beautiful feeling!! Being seperated through death is worst time for the surviving partner. Such emotional fiction.
Love is such a beautiful feeling!! Being seperated through death is worst time for the surviving partner. Such emotional fiction.
Love is such a beautiful feeling!! Being seperated through death is worst time for the surviving partner. Such emotional fiction.
So painful, heart touching story Ujjwal, your story Headline has enough to pull the readers to find out the secret behind i.e 10+10 =10 I found it very interesting.
Thanks for appreciation Archana
So painful, heart touching story Ujjwal, your story Headline has enough to pull the readers to find out the secret behind i.e 10+10 =10 I found it very interesting.
Thanks for appreciation Archana
So painful, heart touching story Ujjwal, your story Headline has enough to pull the readers to find out the secret behind i.e 10+10 =10 I found it very interesting.
Thanks for appreciation Archana
Ouch! My heart just broke. Such a well written story!!
Glad you liked the narration
Ouch! My heart just broke. Such a well written story!!
Glad you liked the narration
Ouch! My heart just broke. Such a well written story!!
Glad you liked the narration
Very well written fiction. I do hope this equation does not remain 10+10=10 for Makarand for long. I am a sucker for happy endings and I’m a hopeless optimist. So I do feel Makarand will get better from now on
Meena from balconysunrise.wordpress.com
yes even I love happy endings of romantic tales, tried to write a sad story this time. 🙂
I would love to write a sad or sombre story, but somehow end up a little hopeful. LOL. I must try harder!
Very well written fiction. I do hope this equation does not remain 10+10=10 for Makarand for long. I am a sucker for happy endings and I’m a hopeless optimist. So I do feel Makarand will get better from now on
Meena from balconysunrise.wordpress.com
yes even I love happy endings of romantic tales, tried to write a sad story this time. 🙂
I would love to write a sad or sombre story, but somehow end up a little hopeful. LOL. I must try harder!
Very well written fiction. I do hope this equation does not remain 10+10=10 for Makarand for long. I am a sucker for happy endings and I’m a hopeless optimist. So I do feel Makarand will get better from now on
Meena from balconysunrise.wordpress.com
yes even I love happy endings of romantic tales, tried to write a sad story this time. 🙂
Very well written fiction. I do hope this equation does not remain 10+10=10 for Makarand for long. I am a sucker for happy endings and I’m a hopeless optimist. So I do feel Makarand will get better from now on
Meena from balconysunrise.wordpress.com
yes even I love happy endings of romantic tales, tried to write a sad story this time. 🙂
Very well written fiction. I do hope this equation does not remain 10+10=10 for Makarand for long. I am a sucker for happy endings and I’m a hopeless optimist. So I do feel Makarand will get better from now on
Meena from balconysunrise.wordpress.com
yes even I love happy endings of romantic tales, tried to write a sad story this time. 🙂
I would love to write a sad or sombre story, but somehow end up a little hopeful. LOL. I must try harder!
Very well written fiction. I do hope this equation does not remain 10+10=10 for Makarand for long. I am a sucker for happy endings and I’m a hopeless optimist. So I do feel Makarand will get better from now on
Meena from balconysunrise.wordpress.com
yes even I love happy endings of romantic tales, tried to write a sad story this time. 🙂
Aww. I am not too keen on sad endings! But that’s life I guess! Let’s hope Makarand comes out of it and finds meaning in life again. Do make a sequel to this one! 😊
after reading feedback, I surely want to write it ahead
You should! 🙂
Aww. I am not too keen on sad endings! But that’s life I guess! Let’s hope Makarand comes out of it and finds meaning in life again. Do make a sequel to this one! 😊
Aww. I am not too keen on sad endings! But that’s life I guess! Let’s hope Makarand comes out of it and finds meaning in life again. Do make a sequel to this one! 😊
Aww. I am not too keen on sad endings! But that’s life I guess! Let’s hope Makarand comes out of it and finds meaning in life again. Do make a sequel to this one! 😊
Aww. I am not too keen on sad endings! But that’s life I guess! Let’s hope Makarand comes out of it and finds meaning in life again. Do make a sequel to this one! 😊
Aww. I am not too keen on sad endings! But that’s life I guess! Let’s hope Makarand comes out of it and finds meaning in life again. Do make a sequel to this one! 😊
after reading feedback, I surely want to write it ahead
You should! 🙂
Heart touching story, very well narrated!!
Heart touching story, very well narrated!!
Heart touching story, very well narrated!!
Heart touching story, very well narrated!!
A heart breaking story of love, loss and life…
I pray this fiction is nobody’s reality! 🙁
thoda fiction thoda inspiration
A heart breaking story of love, loss and life…
I pray this fiction is nobody’s reality! 🙁
thoda fiction thoda inspiration
A heart breaking story of love, loss and life…
I pray this fiction is nobody’s reality! 🙁
A heart breaking story of love, loss and life…
I pray this fiction is nobody’s reality! 🙁
thoda fiction thoda inspiration
A heart breaking story of love, loss and life…
I pray this fiction is nobody’s reality! 🙁
thoda fiction thoda inspiration
A heart breaking story of love, loss and life…
I pray this fiction is nobody’s reality! 🙁
thoda fiction thoda inspiration
Sigh! Those who are left behind, tgey are the people who suffer the most I think.
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Sigh! Those who are left behind, tgey are the people who suffer the most I think.
indeed
Sigh! Those who are left behind, tgey are the people who suffer the most I think.
indeed
Sigh! Those who are left behind, tgey are the people who suffer the most I think.
indeed
Sigh! Those who are left behind, tgey are the people who suffer the most I think.
indeed
A poignant tale. My heart broke. I hope he finds love again. Well written.
So do I 🙂
A poignant tale. My heart broke. I hope he finds love again. Well written.
So do I 🙂
A poignant tale. My heart broke. I hope he finds love again. Well written.
So do I 🙂
A poignant tale. My heart broke. I hope he finds love again. Well written.
So do I 🙂
A poignant tale. My heart broke. I hope he finds love again. Well written.
So do I 🙂
A poignant tale. My heart broke. I hope he finds love again. Well written.
So do I 🙂
Life is always unpredictable. We plan a lot but ultimately destiny puts the noose. Your title is very gripping and you weaved a nice story around loss.
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Life is always unpredictable. We plan a lot but ultimately destiny puts the noose. Your title is very gripping and you weaved a nice story around loss.
Life is always unpredictable. We plan a lot but ultimately destiny puts the noose. Your title is very gripping and you weaved a nice story around loss.
Life is always unpredictable. We plan a lot but ultimately destiny puts the noose. Your title is very gripping and you weaved a nice story around loss.
Though the story broke my heart, I loved you take on the prompt. Losing the person you love is the worst and the most painful. I hope everyone who has lost their loved ones in the last decade have the strength to move on. Loved your post, Ujjwal.
Though the story broke my heart, I loved you take on the prompt. Losing the person you love is the worst and the most painful. I hope everyone who has lost their loved ones in the last decade have the strength to move on. Loved your post, Ujjwal.
Though the story broke my heart, I loved you take on the prompt. Losing the person you love is the worst and the most painful. I hope everyone who has lost their loved ones in the last decade have the strength to move on. Loved your post, Ujjwal.
Though the story broke my heart, I loved you take on the prompt. Losing the person you love is the worst and the most painful. I hope everyone who has lost their loved ones in the last decade have the strength to move on. Loved your post, Ujjwal.
A sad tale of love. I just pray this won’t happen in real life with anyone. A nicely woven story. Great job! Best wishes for this decade 🙂
A sad tale of love. I just pray this won’t happen in real life with anyone. A nicely woven story. Great job! Best wishes for this decade 🙂
Oh! It is very heartbreaking read for me. I pray that God bless everyone with a good and healthy life so that they can spend their good years with their loved ones. Life without our loved ones is just like a routine. You expressed it very well.
Oh! It is very heartbreaking read for me. I pray that God bless everyone with a good and healthy life so that they can spend their good years with their loved ones. Life without our loved ones is just like a routine. You expressed it very well.
Oh! It is very heartbreaking read for me. I pray that God bless everyone with a good and healthy life so that they can spend their good years with their loved ones. Life without our loved ones is just like a routine. You expressed it very well.
Oh! It is very heartbreaking read for me. I pray that God bless everyone with a good and healthy life so that they can spend their good years with their loved ones. Life without our loved ones is just like a routine. You expressed it very well.
Truly heartbreaking. Enjoyed reading it, though. Life has a way of pulling the rug from under our feet just when we are all comfortable. Wishing you the very best.
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Truly heartbreaking. Enjoyed reading it, though. Life has a way of pulling the rug from under our feet just when we are all comfortable. Wishing you the very best.
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Truly heartbreaking. Enjoyed reading it, though. Life has a way of pulling the rug from under our feet just when we are all comfortable. Wishing you the very best.
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Truly heartbreaking. Enjoyed reading it, though. Life has a way of pulling the rug from under our feet just when we are all comfortable. Wishing you the very best.
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Truly heartbreaking. Enjoyed reading it, though. Life has a way of pulling the rug from under our feet just when we are all comfortable. Wishing you the very best.
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I loved the story even though it was a sad one. Losing your loved ones is the greatest tragedy in life and life doesn’t really moves on. It drags like it was for Makarand.
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I loved the story even though it was a sad one. Losing your loved ones is the greatest tragedy in life and life doesn’t really moves on. It drags like it was for Makarand.
🙏 glad to hear from you
I loved the story even though it was a sad one. Losing your loved ones is the greatest tragedy in life and life doesn’t really moves on. It drags like it was for Makarand.
🙏 glad to hear from you
I loved the story even though it was a sad one. Losing your loved ones is the greatest tragedy in life and life doesn’t really moves on. It drags like it was for Makarand.
🙏 glad to hear from you
I loved the story even though it was a sad one. Losing your loved ones is the greatest tragedy in life and life doesn’t really moves on. It drags like it was for Makarand.
🙏 glad to hear from you
that was a sad decade for Markand and made me sad too. but kudos to ur imagination. Well woven story.. keep it up. I hope markand finds his love and hope in the sequel of this story.
that was a sad decade for Markand and made me sad too. but kudos to ur imagination. Well woven story.. keep it up. I hope markand finds his love and hope in the sequel of this story.
That was a story that touched the soul. Love can make or break a person.
That was a story that touched the soul. Love can make or break a person.
That was a story that touched the soul. Love can make or break a person.
That was a story that touched the soul. Love can make or break a person.
That was a story that touched the soul. Love can make or break a person.
I always wish Love should never break a person but it depends on the situations. Makrand should find his love. As I write tragedy I could connect so well to your piece.
Thanks a lot, getting this feedback from you matters a lot to me
I always wish Love should never break a person but it depends on the situations. Makrand should find his love. As I write tragedy I could connect so well to your piece.
I always wish Love should never break a person but it depends on the situations. Makrand should find his love. As I write tragedy I could connect so well to your piece.
I always wish Love should never break a person but it depends on the situations. Makrand should find his love. As I write tragedy I could connect so well to your piece.
Thanks a lot, getting this feedback from you matters a lot to me
I always wish Love should never break a person but it depends on the situations. Makrand should find his love. As I write tragedy I could connect so well to your piece.
Thanks a lot, getting this feedback from you matters a lot to me
I always wish Love should never break a person but it depends on the situations. Makrand should find his love. As I write tragedy I could connect so well to your piece.
Thanks a lot, getting this feedback from you matters a lot to me
Such a beautiful piece of fiction. Hope nobody goes through the same in their real life as true love is tough to find.
Such a beautiful piece of fiction. Hope nobody goes through the same in their real life as true love is tough to find.
Such a beautiful piece of fiction. Hope nobody goes through the same in their real life as true love is tough to find.
This story was very depressing for me to read…this happens so much in real life that u don’t want to read in fiction too. My husband passed away suddenly and I am still struggling to make sense of my life.
I am sorry of reminding you the saddest part of your life.
This story was very depressing for me to read…this happens so much in real life that u don’t want to read in fiction too. My husband passed away suddenly and I am still struggling to make sense of my life.
I am sorry of reminding you the saddest part of your life.
This story was very depressing for me to read…this happens so much in real life that u don’t want to read in fiction too. My husband passed away suddenly and I am still struggling to make sense of my life.
I am sorry of reminding you the saddest part of your life.
Very pathetic love story…nicely penned.
Very pathetic love story…nicely penned.
Very pathetic love story…nicely penned.
Very pathetic love story…nicely penned.
Very pathetic love story…nicely penned.
Ah, such a poignant and heartbreaking story, you kept me glued till the end, Ujjwal. I liked the take on the prompt.
Ah, such a poignant and heartbreaking story, you kept me glued till the end, Ujjwal. I liked the take on the prompt.
Ah, such a poignant and heartbreaking story, you kept me glued till the end, Ujjwal. I liked the take on the prompt.
Ah, such a poignant and heartbreaking story, you kept me glued till the end, Ujjwal. I liked the take on the prompt.
Ah, such a poignant and heartbreaking story, you kept me glued till the end, Ujjwal. I liked the take on the prompt.
Ah, such a poignant and heartbreaking story, you kept me glued till the end, Ujjwal. I liked the take on the prompt.
Heartbreaking but touching. Great prose.
Heartbreaking but touching. Great prose.
Heartbreaking but touching. Great prose.
Heartbreaking but touching. Great prose.
Heartbreaking but touching. Great prose.
Heartbreaking but touching. Great prose.
This was a heartbreaking post. No luxury can replace love, I have witnessed that. I hope Makarand finds a reason to love.
This was a heartbreaking post. No luxury can replace love, I have witnessed that. I hope Makarand finds a reason to love.
This was a heartbreaking post. No luxury can replace love, I have witnessed that. I hope Makarand finds a reason to love.
This was a heartbreaking post. No luxury can replace love, I have witnessed that. I hope Makarand finds a reason to love.
This was a heartbreaking post. No luxury can replace love, I have witnessed that. I hope Makarand finds a reason to love.
This was a heartbreaking post. No luxury can replace love, I have witnessed that. I hope Makarand finds a reason to love.
Heart touching story . Wonderful
Heart touching story . Wonderful
Heart touching story . Wonderful
Heart touching story . Wonderful
Ooops this was a sad one. But the reality of many of are running successfully in their careers but seldom have time to pause and enjoy.
Well written and given emotional punches at the right place.
Ooops this was a sad one. But the reality of many of are running successfully in their careers but seldom have time to pause and enjoy.
Well written and given emotional punches at the right place.
It was heart breaking for me..But I would like to appreciate the way you wrote it.You had me hooked till the end…Very touching…
Glad my words are able to transfer the emotions
It was heart breaking for me..But I would like to appreciate the way you wrote it.You had me hooked till the end…Very touching…
Glad my words are able to transfer the emotions
It was heart breaking for me..But I would like to appreciate the way you wrote it.You had me hooked till the end…Very touching…
Glad my words are able to transfer the emotions
It was heart breaking for me..But I would like to appreciate the way you wrote it.You had me hooked till the end…Very touching…
Glad my words are able to transfer the emotions
Though heartbreaking, what a beautifully crafted piece of fiction! Way to go.
Though heartbreaking, what a beautifully crafted piece of fiction! Way to go.
Though heartbreaking, what a beautifully crafted piece of fiction! Way to go.
And this was heartbreaking.
What love can do and what it can without the soul is depicted in this quill by you ..
And this was heartbreaking.
What love can do and what it can without the soul is depicted in this quill by you ..
And this was heartbreaking.
What love can do and what it can without the soul is depicted in this quill by you ..
And this was heartbreaking.
What love can do and what it can without the soul is depicted in this quill by you ..
And this was heartbreaking.
What love can do and what it can without the soul is depicted in this quill by you ..
It is really sad and tragic to lose someone so close and lead such a life. I pray he finds his peace in life.
It is really sad and tragic to lose someone so close and lead such a life. I pray he finds his peace in life.
It is really sad and tragic to lose someone so close and lead such a life. I pray he finds his peace in life.
It is really sad and tragic to lose someone so close and lead such a life. I pray he finds his peace in life.
It is really sad and tragic to lose someone so close and lead such a life. I pray he finds his peace in life.
This is such a sad story and it’s so sad that we cannot do much but accept what happening. Hope he has healed!
This is such a sad story and it’s so sad that we cannot do much but accept what happening. Hope he has healed!
This is such a sad story and it’s so sad that we cannot do much but accept what happening. Hope he has healed!
This is such a sad story and it’s so sad that we cannot do much but accept what happening. Hope he has healed!
This is such a sad story and it’s so sad that we cannot do much but accept what happening. Hope he has healed!
This is such a sad story and it’s so sad that we cannot do much but accept what happening. Hope he has healed!
Heart wrenching story. Nicely written
Heart wrenching story. Nicely written
Heart wrenching story. Nicely written
Heart wrenching story. Nicely written
Heart wrenching story. Nicely written
Heart wrenching story. Nicely written
Such a sad story…hope Makarand finds love and happiness again!
Such a sad story…hope Makarand finds love and happiness again!
Such a sad story…hope Makarand finds love and happiness again!
Such a sad story…hope Makarand finds love and happiness again!
Happiness ko nazar lag gaye! Sometimes life takes over and we just stand watching, hustling and bustling, not able to do anything! The happy times and memories stood out in your post!
Happiness ko nazar lag gaye! Sometimes life takes over and we just stand watching, hustling and bustling, not able to do anything! The happy times and memories stood out in your post!
Happiness ko nazar lag gaye! Sometimes life takes over and we just stand watching, hustling and bustling, not able to do anything! The happy times and memories stood out in your post!
How God can be so unfair to them. I really how this is a fiction story and not a real one. But truly this is a heart touching sad story.. Hope he finds the love again in his life
How God can be so unfair to them. I really how this is a fiction story and not a real one. But truly this is a heart touching sad story.. Hope he finds the love again in his life
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How God can be so unfair to them. I really how this is a fiction story and not a real one. But truly this is a heart touching sad story.. Hope he finds the love again in his life
Thoda fiction thoda inspiration
How God can be so unfair to them. I really how this is a fiction story and not a real one. But truly this is a heart touching sad story.. Hope he finds the love again in his life
Thoda fiction thoda inspiration
A sad and moving story Ujjwal. You have a good grip on romantic fiction (as I remember from A-Z days!). This story made me sad but it was a creative take on the prompt.
Thanks Noor
A sad and moving story Ujjwal. You have a good grip on romantic fiction (as I remember from A-Z days!). This story made me sad but it was a creative take on the prompt.
A sad and moving story Ujjwal. You have a good grip on romantic fiction (as I remember from A-Z days!). This story made me sad but it was a creative take on the prompt.
Thanks Noor
A sad and moving story Ujjwal. You have a good grip on romantic fiction (as I remember from A-Z days!). This story made me sad but it was a creative take on the prompt.
A sad and moving story Ujjwal. You have a good grip on romantic fiction (as I remember from A-Z days!). This story made me sad but it was a creative take on the prompt.
A sad and moving story Ujjwal. You have a good grip on romantic fiction (as I remember from A-Z days!). This story made me sad but it was a creative take on the prompt.
Such a nice tale.. A poignant one
Such a nice tale.. A poignant one
Such a nice tale.. A poignant one
Such a nice tale.. A poignant one
Your story brought me to tears but well written with love for your craft 😊good luck
Your story brought me to tears but well written with love for your craft 😊good luck
Your story brought me to tears but well written with love for your craft 😊good luck
Your story brought me to tears but well written with love for your craft 😊good luck
Your story brought me to tears but well written with love for your craft 😊good luck
Oh what a heart wrenching story. We should never take our loved ones for granted. It is definitely painful to lose our beloved ! Great attempt at story telling in an effective way !
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Oh what a heart wrenching story. We should never take our loved ones for granted. It is definitely painful to lose our beloved ! Great attempt at story telling in an effective way !
Oh what a heart wrenching story. We should never take our loved ones for granted. It is definitely painful to lose our beloved ! Great attempt at story telling in an effective way !
Glad to hear from you
Oh what a heart wrenching story. We should never take our loved ones for granted. It is definitely painful to lose our beloved ! Great attempt at story telling in an effective way !
Glad to hear from you
This is heart wrenching. I have been through a similar time and it has left a void in me. But every day I try to fill it with tiny moments of happiness.
Sorry to hear that dear. You are courageous i am sure.
This is heart wrenching. I have been through a similar time and it has left a void in me. But every day I try to fill it with tiny moments of happiness.
Sorry to hear that dear. You are courageous i am sure.
This is heart wrenching. I have been through a similar time and it has left a void in me. But every day I try to fill it with tiny moments of happiness.
Heart-wrenching story. You had me hooked. Heart still beats for the one who was called far away.
Heart-wrenching story. You had me hooked. Heart still beats for the one who was called far away.
Heart-wrenching story. You had me hooked. Heart still beats for the one who was called far away.
Heart-wrenching story. You had me hooked. Heart still beats for the one who was called far away.
I could feel the passion they had in their relationship. You have presented the story beautifully. Would love to read more such stories.
I could feel the passion they had in their relationship. You have presented the story beautifully. Would love to read more such stories.
I could feel the passion they had in their relationship. You have presented the story beautifully. Would love to read more such stories.
I could feel the passion they had in their relationship. You have presented the story beautifully. Would love to read more such stories.
An extremely heart wrenching story. I have some feedback as an author, but that can wait. For now, I really loved the story line and was left numb as it ended. Beautiful is the word I have for this story
Will connect with you on whatsapp, would surely love to get the feedback from you
An extremely heart wrenching story. I have some feedback as an author, but that can wait. For now, I really loved the story line and was left numb as it ended. Beautiful is the word I have for this story
An extremely heart wrenching story. I have some feedback as an author, but that can wait. For now, I really loved the story line and was left numb as it ended. Beautiful is the word I have for this story
Will connect with you on whatsapp, would surely love to get the feedback from you
An extremely heart wrenching story. I have some feedback as an author, but that can wait. For now, I really loved the story line and was left numb as it ended. Beautiful is the word I have for this story
An extremely heart wrenching story. I have some feedback as an author, but that can wait. For now, I really loved the story line and was left numb as it ended. Beautiful is the word I have for this story
Very well written ujjwal.
Very well written ujjwal.
Very well written ujjwal.
Very well written ujjwal.
Very well written ujjwal.
It was a heart-wrenching story hope Makarand finds love again and live life to the fullest. The ending line was heart touching .
It was a heart-wrenching story hope Makarand finds love again and live life to the fullest. The ending line was heart touching .
It was a heart-wrenching story hope Makarand finds love again and live life to the fullest. The ending line was heart touching .
It was a heart-wrenching story hope Makarand finds love again and live life to the fullest. The ending line was heart touching .
It was a heart-wrenching story hope Makarand finds love again and live life to the fullest. The ending line was heart touching .
It was a heart-wrenching story hope Makarand finds love again and live life to the fullest. The ending line was heart touching .
Very Well-written. A sad but realistic take on life when someone very dear passes away. Keep Writing
#readbypreetispanorama
Thanks Preeti
Very Well-written. A sad but realistic take on life when someone very dear passes away. Keep Writing
#readbypreetispanorama
Thanks Preeti
Very Well-written. A sad but realistic take on life when someone very dear passes away. Keep Writing
#readbypreetispanorama
Very Well-written. A sad but realistic take on life when someone very dear passes away. Keep Writing
#readbypreetispanorama
Your writing style had me hooked till the end and in the last para my eyes teared up, the story was full of deep emotions which were heart-piercing. God, no one should ever go through such pain of losing someone dear. It was a very well written piece of fiction.
Thanks Neha
Your writing style had me hooked till the end and in the last para my eyes teared up, the story was full of deep emotions which were heart-piercing. God, no one should ever go through such pain of losing someone dear. It was a very well written piece of fiction.
Thanks Neha
Your writing style had me hooked till the end and in the last para my eyes teared up, the story was full of deep emotions which were heart-piercing. God, no one should ever go through such pain of losing someone dear. It was a very well written piece of fiction.
Thanks Neha
Your writing style had me hooked till the end and in the last para my eyes teared up, the story was full of deep emotions which were heart-piercing. God, no one should ever go through such pain of losing someone dear. It was a very well written piece of fiction.
Loveddd it! the wy you wrote is amazing
Loveddd it! the wy you wrote is amazing
This is heartbreaking. I know moving on is tough but he cannot die with the ones who have gone. Life goes on. I wish Makarand lead a more satisfactory life for Tarini’s sake.
This is heartbreaking. I know moving on is tough but he cannot die with the ones who have gone. Life goes on. I wish Makarand lead a more satisfactory life for Tarini’s sake.
Glad you liked it Varsha
This is heartbreaking. I know moving on is tough but he cannot die with the ones who have gone. Life goes on. I wish Makarand lead a more satisfactory life for Tarini’s sake.
Glad you liked it Varsha
This is heartbreaking. I know moving on is tough but he cannot die with the ones who have gone. Life goes on. I wish Makarand lead a more satisfactory life for Tarini’s sake.
This is heartbreaking. I know moving on is tough but he cannot die with the ones who have gone. Life goes on. I wish Makarand lead a more satisfactory life for Tarini’s sake.
Glad you liked it Varsha
Heart breaking story. I cant really imaging someone in such a situation. Is this a fiction or a part of someones life ?
— rightpurchasing
Heart breaking story. I cant really imaging someone in such a situation. Is this a fiction or a part of someones life ?
— rightpurchasing
Life had a different plan for them. 😑 Sad endings leave a scar forever ! Well written dear.
Life had a different plan for them. 😑 Sad endings leave a scar forever ! Well written dear.
Life had a different plan for them. 😑 Sad endings leave a scar forever ! Well written dear.
Life had a different plan for them. 😑 Sad endings leave a scar forever ! Well written dear.
Life had a different plan for them. 😑 Sad endings leave a scar forever ! Well written dear.
Losing someone you love is never an easy thing to live with. Your writing managed to make us all feel his pain.
This feedback from you means a lot to me Mayuri
Losing someone you love is never an easy thing to live with. Your writing managed to make us all feel his pain.
Have some feedback on the writeup but the emotions shone through! authentic piece of fiction.
Please do share, i am keen on getting feedback.
Have some feedback on the writeup but the emotions shone through! authentic piece of fiction.
Have some feedback on the writeup but the emotions shone through! authentic piece of fiction.
Please do share, i am keen on getting feedback.
Have some feedback on the writeup but the emotions shone through! authentic piece of fiction.
Please do share, i am keen on getting feedback.
Have some feedback on the writeup but the emotions shone through! authentic piece of fiction.
Please do share, i am keen on getting feedback.
You had me hooked Ujjwal. It was a beautifully written story.
You had me hooked Ujjwal. It was a beautifully written story.
You had me hooked Ujjwal. It was a beautifully written story.
You had me hooked Ujjwal. It was a beautifully written story.
You had me hooked Ujjwal. It was a beautifully written story.
One of my husband’s friends story is exactly same. Though his married life lasted for a year only. Dengue took his wife’s life away. He re-married but the loss was huge.
One of my husband’s friends story is exactly same. Though his married life lasted for a year only. Dengue took his wife’s life away. He re-married but the loss was huge.
One of my husband’s friends story is exactly same. Though his married life lasted for a year only. Dengue took his wife’s life away. He re-married but the loss was huge.
What a beautiful saga. I’m amazed there exists such true love in today’s age, where people find it extremely convenient to move on. Was a soul wrenching read, their life, their bond and their eternal love story.
I am able to translate this through words and getting it recommended by you is a big deal for me. Thanks for the generous words
What a beautiful saga. I’m amazed there exists such true love in today’s age, where people find it extremely convenient to move on. Was a soul wrenching read, their life, their bond and their eternal love story.
I am able to translate this through words and getting it recommended by you is a big deal for me. Thanks for the generous words
What a beautiful saga. I’m amazed there exists such true love in today’s age, where people find it extremely convenient to move on. Was a soul wrenching read, their life, their bond and their eternal love story.
I am able to translate this through words and getting it recommended by you is a big deal for me. Thanks for the generous words
What a beautiful saga. I’m amazed there exists such true love in today’s age, where people find it extremely convenient to move on. Was a soul wrenching read, their life, their bond and their eternal love story.
What a beautiful saga. I’m amazed there exists such true love in today’s age, where people find it extremely convenient to move on. Was a soul wrenching read, their life, their bond and their eternal love story.
What a beautiful saga. I’m amazed there exists such true love in today’s age, where people find it extremely convenient to move on. Was a soul wrenching read, their life, their bond and their eternal love story.
I am able to translate this through words and getting it recommended by you is a big deal for me. Thanks for the generous words
The beautiful smiling faces never tell what story they carry inside. This is a heart-breaking tale of love and loss. Love also, and always, gives a second chance. Ask him to hold on to that one.
#DecadeHop #RRxMM
The beautiful smiling faces never tell what story they carry inside. This is a heart-breaking tale of love and loss. Love also, and always, gives a second chance. Ask him to hold on to that one.
#DecadeHop #RRxMM
Love stories, whether sad or happy, have their own charm. Maybe, because love never dies. You made me feel the pain. Beautifully penned. Am so happy you participated in our blog hop 🙂
Love stories, whether sad or happy, have their own charm. Maybe, because love never dies. You made me feel the pain. Beautifully penned. Am so happy you participated in our blog hop 🙂
Love stories, whether sad or happy, have their own charm. Maybe, because love never dies. You made me feel the pain. Beautifully penned. Am so happy you participated in our blog hop 🙂
Love stories, whether sad or happy, have their own charm. Maybe, because love never dies. You made me feel the pain. Beautifully penned. Am so happy you participated in our blog hop 🙂
Love stories, whether sad or happy, have their own charm. Maybe, because love never dies. You made me feel the pain. Beautifully penned. Am so happy you participated in our blog hop 🙂